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Commenting on blog posts

Remember, we will only approve good quality comments to the blog. Follow these steps when posting a comment.

  • One: Say something positive “I really like how you have tried to use some powerful verbs in your writing. It helps bring it to life.”
  • Two: Ask a question By asking a question, you are encouraging a reply and you are engaging the author. “Your writing makes me think that you may have read some Michael Morpurgo books. Which story inspired you to write this?
  • Three: Suggest an improvement “To make this even better, you could change the way you opened the final sentence. Can you think of an adverb that would work? Leave a comment with some ideas.”

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Take a look at these comments. Which one do you think is an example of a good quality comment? Can you explain why? Can you explain why the other comments aren’t good enough and suggest what could be done differently?

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The Moon Landing.

The Moon Landing

NEIL ARMSTRONG...The Man Who Took The First Step On The Luna,,,,Had His Last Breath...Few Moments Ago Sunciti _ Sundaram’s Images + Messages via Compfight

Today we are finding out about the Moon landings. Use these links to help you with your research. Make sure you write things down because you will be writing a diary entry from the point of view of Neil Armstrong later in the week. Try to imagine what it might have been like for the astronauts taking part on the mission.

Space for Kids website.

Footage from the BBC of Neil Armstrong landing on the Moon.

Video clip of the men who landed on the moon from the BBC.

Another website about the Moon landing.

World Education Games

This week is the World Education Games:
Your mission is to play 20 games of Maths, Spelling and Science and see how well you can do!

There are leaderboards for just our school, the UK and the World.

Can you become a champion of our school?

Logon using your Mathletics login and password at: http://www.3plearning.com/worldeducationgames/

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